2012年10月11日星期四

bring one person and suitcase


“Martin, if the earth will be destroy tomorrow, who will you bring with? Only can be one person!” I ask my little brother, and force myself a smile to him.

“I will bring my little sister, my little doll!” he doesn’t perceive any different.

“I mean a person.” I emphasize again.

“Then I’m going to bring you, sis!”

“Why?” I ask him, “I can’t cook, can’t wash the clothes for you, I don’t know how to clean the house, and I don’t have a job, don’t have money.”

“But you’re my sister, who else I can bring?” he doesn’t understand my question.

“Why don’t you bring mom or dad, they can do what I can’t do. You don’t like them?” I keep asking him.

“They will get old, you can learn, right?” he smiles, “who you will bring then?”

“I will bring you, Martin. I will learn how to do these for you.” I pat his head, “Do you know what stuff I will bring there?”

“I don’t know, tell me!” he’s getting excited,”I’m going to bring my doll this time, and my bed, ”he stopped for one second,” oh yeah, and your laptop. ”

“I will bring my golf club, I like them.”

“That’s it?”

“Yeah, that’s it, that’s enough for me.”

college essay


  College essay <university of Georgia>

Incredibly, you have just won a $100 million lottery.  To receive it, you must first earn a college degree.  How does this change your college experience?  How does it change your life after college?

 

 Can you believe that I just won the lottery?! And it’s $100million dollars?! Ok I know that’s incredible, but I’m still in high school, and I’m a senior. Actually I’m going to tell you how I got it first. Last time I went to the beach with my friends at Miami, and we got a lottery for everyone, and we got a bet that whoever get it will pay us dinner next time, no matter its $5 box or $100 million. And after that I just went back home and I told my roommate that crazy experience and she was ridicule. And after a while she was staring at me like a freak, and then she told me I won that.

   But my parents told me that I have to earn a college degree to get that money, they only let me use a little bit of them to get my degree, so… okay, let me get it. I ‘m a college student, and actually I’m in college golf team, and I got full scholarship, so I can use just a tinny of them to get a coach for my swing and my putting, to get me more technically professional. And that’s already a lot of words to tell you how will I getting good only for my golf. So let me tell you about my study improvement. I’ m going to get some practice event, and I’ll try some small company, get some experience. I will have some traveling fees, and the most important thing is to finish up the graduate paper, and I think it might need a few trip or etc, so I need some money for those.

   And after I finish my college, I’m really in this “world” now! And I’m sure there must be some more difficulties waiting for me, so I get to work hard for better life. But sometimes I think I will need some money at my back. So, because my major was sports management , so it’s really good to find out how the famous people doing first, so I can go and watch some tournament and get to know some players and try to keep in touch some sports manger, I mean if it’s possible, and look at their player conference, get to know how the speak to the media, and how they wear, how they practice and how they act to people, that’s the real things for a sports manager, that’s how they do their job, so it’s a good thing to learn from them.

   So that’s how I use my $100 million box, and I think after those I will be a person that deserve that much money.

earth without people

Minta Yin
English IV
Coach Morrell
Sept 4, 2012
Earth without people?
What will happen if earth never had people lived here? The author is questioning us can we go back to how it all started, how human and earth started. What can we change it when we see the different? I think having people in earth is the best thing ever happened to earth, or we would not be here learning and writing. I agreed that earth are getting closer and closer to it all going to start over again like the author said, but we can not blame our self, all we can do is to all try to make it better.
The author listed many examples that try to prove the point of what have we done to the earth. Started with the korea military base use up the place of used to plant rice. Then talked about how America would have more species of animals according to research. I really agree to what the author try to say. The human had been doing things to earth that really not helping ourself and not helping the earth.
But I m not the kind of person that like to look back. I would like to look ahead and try to do my best to help the earth even the source that we are using are going to run out one day, or more animals are close of becoming extinct. I just think right now recycling, reuse, and all the things that we are trying to do to help is working. I try to think everything positive. Making process is alway good. I feel like the writer give me a tone of negative, which I really don’t like. But no matter what happen, I will always support the things that will protect our earth.

journal Oct.10

Listen to music is one of my favorite things to do when I m trying to give myself a break and get away of everything. The smooth music with beautiful words. The words in the songs will always inspire me in some way of make me think of love, peace, romance, actions, and encouragement.
I know so many songs and know all the words. The break up love songs give me some memories. The sweet happy songs give me the happy time I spend with my family, friends, or my lovely little brother! All of these I can get just from listening to music on my own. But there is this one song that I love the most is a encourage song.
Let me translate this song in to english so everyone can enjoy it with me. It says “the sun with out the rainbow, even when you are alone, you got to be strong and tough.
Stay strong, always believe and protect your dream. Let the wind and rain run past you. You will grow from failing, and shine.” What the words inspire me is always stay strong, be positive, and believing in my dream, even sometimes I feel alone doing something, just keep believing. There are going to be things that I fail to do, things that I need to get better. It is all just learning process and get better. One day I m going to shine, and be the best.
I m sure everyone have a dream, we just have to keep believing and and be strong even when you feel alone. We can be the best.

jurnal Oct.11

The is the place where we get education. Many students think uniform are not important, it is stupid, and waste of money. In my opinion that is not true. School is a sacred place that every student need to all the respect they have. Including wearing the proper, official, and nice uniforms.
I always think why don’t many students like wearing uniforms. One of the reason is waste of money, and it does not look good. Also they have comparison to many of their friends are in public school, which they don’t need to wear uniforms.
What I think is girls show wear dress or skirt with coat and button down. Boys should wear coat and ties and long pants. I think have every student in school look good is very important, plus very formal and proper. Coat and ties, and lady dress are the most formal things to wear to any place.
Money wise, it does spend a lot of money, but I think if you have the money to go to private school, buy uniform should not be a problem. I think it is more on the student like to wear their own cloth, and some time in my opinion, its gets sloppy. Student should give very much respect to school and teachers. And if I m a visiter of the school with just proper and formal uniform will give me a very deep memories about the school.
Students lets grow up and dress formal, and get prepare for the world from high school.

picture from my phone


That was actually me and my best friend on the photo. We were standing in front of the aquarium and waiting for the big black dolphin.

“You are just so childish.” he looked at us really scornful. “I don’t want to wait there gratuitously.” He handed my phone back and left.

“He must be angry,” My friend said, “and he must feel bland.”

“But he was pretty convincing.” I laughed, “I’ll call someone else to come.”

We walked down to the big pool and looked at sunset, that moment for me was so dreamlike. I wish I can go back to that time.

As the sun felled down, the sunlight started being weak. “Lets just take a picture, such a beautiful view!” she plaint.

2012年10月9日星期二

journal Oct.9


“Mom, please just let me do it, I can take care of it!” I was almost screaming to the phone at 1:00 at night.

I was crying like a little girl at midnight, don’t ask me why, and don’t think I’m flimsily. I was just get a reprimand from my mom, the only reason is, absolutely golf.

“Honey, I have to tell you this, although I know nothing about golf and English, I’m still an adult, I’m still your mom… ” she just kept saying like that. Well, I have to say I’m tired of it.

“The only way to get coach’s attention is to get some low scores,” she stopped, seems like waiting for me to refute her point, but I didn’t,”also have to contact her more, I know your English barrier, she will understand it.”

“Mom, I said I did text her, I did email her, I did call her, and also I worked hard, I practiced more on my weakness, I am improving!” I rubbed my temple and tensioned my quilt, mumbled to her impatiently. I just can’t understand her, it’s already 1 o clock for me, and I’m too tired to refute her back.

“Okay, I see. Make sure to go to fitness every morning, you should work out every other day at least…”

“Mom! Please just let me sleep! I have already been ruin from the school and golf; I’m too tired to speak to you, just hang up!”I used my last strength screamed to her.